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Writing for print vs. blogging   Julia Scott makes the transition and shares her tips

Recommended Reading 4   Try finding a watchdog these days

Recommended reading 3   When to Use Quotes, and When not to

Recommended reading 2   The disease that haunts our lives

Recommended reading inside!   A perfect game and an imperfect relationship

'Don't Give Up.
Don't Ever Give Up.'
   A speech to put the L.A. Times'
bloodbath into perspective


What? He recorded a CD?
What kinda career
switch is this?
   Best of all, it comes with money-back guarantee

Once you begin killing quotes. . .   . . .interesting things happen.
In this case, powerful details blossomed


Obama's secret weapon   1954 is happening all over again

'It is your business. . . to
keep the channel open'
   A therapist's guide to
using the best part of yourself


Does your copy have that bloated feeling?   23 tips to cut fat from your story

It's always more
complicated
than you think
   What 4 op-ed pieces in 11 days
can tell us about 'truth'


Striking a balance when the facts are cloudy   Breaking down an NYT cop-shooting story

Squeeeeeez it!   One life told in 408 words

Going deeper   Take four bites of David Brooks
and call me in the morning


Unhappy anniversary   Why there's less
'good' news at my old paper


Characters,
characters,
characters
   What I learned from David Halberstam

'I Want to Watch'   They let you in. Now what?

Pardon me while
I ram my hobby
down your throat
   The story of how Walter Mitty
met Conway Twitty


Taking the easy way out   NYT puts itself in front of the
battering ram with abortion story


'It makes me crazy...'    '...But I grit my teeth because I know that things are changing'

How not to blog   Giving in to your impulses
is a good way to start a posting,
but it's a lousy way to finish it


Wanna keep your readers? School 'em   The genesis of a
must-read education column


Make your story
sing before you
hit the 'send' key
   Reporters' tips on self-polishing

If you read only one 9/11 story...   ...Read Joe Nocera's column about the odyssey of Sandler O'Neil & Partners

At the end of the day,
do an about-face on clichés
   A database specialist
exposes the worst violators


Eliminate the elliptical!   Why one 'superhero' story crashed as another succeeded

Critiquing the NYT critique   Staffers warn of 'gum in the gears,' self-absorbed writing and too many rules

The war on leisurely leads
and anecdote addiction
   Inside the NYT's self-critical
effort to energize its A-1 writing


'Passion' is
no ordinary word
   Which is why Bob is banning it.

Don't tell me what it's not. Tell me what it IS   The war against negative characterization

Your pledge for 2006   Try creating a symbolic
mathematical statement of
where you want your game to go


Well, maybe it DOES matter   Some readers are inspired.
Others urge Bob to take
his head out of the sand


'It just doesn't MATTER'   A new mantra for the next time Chicken Little crosses your path

Knitting the yarn   Stuart Pfeifer scores and gets credit for an accidental assist

Step away from the vehicle   Nick Sortal's formula
for finding true-life tales


'...and you can paraphrase me on that.'   how to deprogram yourself from overquoting

Conceit bites writer!   A first-person tale
of the price of self-deception


A big hand for
those 2 little dots
   Plus:
--Exploiting contrast
--The case against adjectives
--Breaking down your Q/A style


Because you asked for it...   ...Here is Part II of Barry Siegel's reconstruction

Two tricks to punch up your leads   (1) Ask a question. (2) Throw the jab

Cruising cool intersections   Two examples of why the NYT is so damned interesting

Breaking down the power of a tsunami 'tick tock'   Kill enough quotes and keep your eye on story momentum and your reconstruction will sweep away the reader

The 'I's have it   Paul Lieberman makes the case for the first-person injection

Distillation = Context + Compression   Columnists have some lessons to teach writers on the straight side

Will perspective outweigh news on the campaign trail?   Taking note of candidates' truth-stretching and opaqueness pushes stories toward contextual overload

Winning from behind   Shawn Hubler on following--and transcending--the competition

It's the transitions, stupid!   A feature falls into Bob's lap...if only he can make the pieces fit

Once you get 'em in the tent, how do you keep 'em there?   Tricks to battle reader attrition

Finally...a guy who makes you think   An early valentine to columnist David Brooks

'Burn! Baby! BURN!'   Bob co-authors the autobiography of the R&B deejay who enthralled him as a kid

Blogging the blogger   Fearful of losing his readers, our hero stoops to parody

'These great truths need no bucking up from me'   Read Steve Rubenstein's feature for what's not there

The beginning of the ending   How good advice from (gasp!) an editor set up the setup

Who's your paper's most-quoted 'expert'?   He, or she, just might make a story

Chunky soup   Life rarely gives you a seamless narrative. Here we employ three separate chunks of movement.

Quotes? We don't need your stinking quotes!   When your own syntax and structure do the talking

Post-Rehab IV: What goes up? What goes down?   A multi-dimensional story demands a sequencing concession

Post-Rehab III: It's a story because I say so   Chronicling C- and D-level personalities

Post-Rehab II: Keeping it real   A con man's story leads our hero to new heights of second-guessing

Post-Rehab I: Whatever happened to...?   Scratching an itch leads to an unexpected tale

Rehab V: D'oh! A gimmick addiction!   In which our hero is unable to leave well enough alone

Rehab IV: Feature writing on deadline   With little time to think, planning became the key virtue

Rehab III: The Profile   In which our hero walks the tightrope between guiding the reader and getting the hell out of the way

Rehab II: Get me re-write!!!   Law, technology, sex and religion throw a groovy little party, and Bob gets overwhelmed.

Rehab I: Bob returns to reporting   Lessons learned--and re-learned--after a 9-year layoff

Our affair could not last, but the archives will   Bob rejoins the ranks of reporters, halts new postings and reveals why

Taking notes and making notes    Bill Hatch probes the symbiotic relationship between music and writing

'Yeah, I'm defensive. You gotta problem with that?'   Laurie Hertzel goes searching for counsel on how to take criticism more gracefully

Making sense of a landmark decision   NYT vs. LAT on Supreme Court execution case offers lessons in sequencing and sidebars

A dummy's guide to the hard-core basics   Writing coach Steve Buttry offers a handy checklist of all the easy stuff we continually forget. Print this out and carry at all times.

Obits: Closing the gap between good and great   To sum up a life, you must improve your sense of focus and authority

Connecting the pop culture dots   Are we in the midst of a blackploitation revival (L.A. Times) or a funk revival (N.Y. Times)?

'How I wrote the story': Navigating the 'anniversary' assignment   Steve Springer probes the legacy of a few ill-chosen words about race that stunned the sports world

The case for understatement   How holding back the hype can create the proper tone

How to be a more enterprising beat reporter   What happened to that annual promise to stop doing obligatory stories and start doing pieces that say something? Fifteen tips for renewal

'How I wrote the story': Coming of age in the riots   Ten years later, Daren Briscoe finds big truths in small tales

Editor's Journal: A test of perspective   Two more weeks of the priest abuse scandal means even more pressure to explain inside baseball

Telling your story through the life of one person   Stephanie Chavez scores one big goal and one big assist

Editor's Journal: The church abuse scandal   A newspaper takes on a stonewalling cardinal and nobody wins

'How I wrote the story': Bringing a subculture into focus   Explaining a poignant social problem near the Mexican border, Sebastian Rotella became the real Boss

'How I wrote the story': Wrestling with obscurity   Mike Boehm makes you want to know more about somebody you never heard of

'I want to edit with more authority'   Marc Duvoisin's post-mortem tips for line editors

'How I wrote the story': You have five hours to make sense of 9,000 pages    Matt Lait & friends find a needle in a haystack on deadline

'I want my writing to be more nuanced'   Breaking down a story that operates in the gray areas

'How I wrote the story': When is it a brief? When is it 1,200 words?   A reporter finds deeper meaning in an everyday big-city crime

'I want to write with more authority'   Six strategies to put a higher proportion of your reporting into your stories

'How I wrote the story': Getting inside a character   Josh Getlin's profile of a notorious lawyer shows you how to peel back the layers

'How I wrote the story': Making the audience love the story you hate   Tom Gorman conquers journalism's dullest subject

Math for journalists   Shaky on percentages? Ratios? Rates? Averages? Take Jack Robinson's refresher course

Going the extra mile before you hit the 'send' key    Your final self-edit should hurt. If it doesn't, you need to do one more.

How to be a playah   Playing off the news: a graf-by-graf breakdown of local-angle journalism

'How I wrote the story': Wrestling with the access dilemma   Armed with a stack of business cards, David Ferrell probes a jailhouse

Ten hurdles to narrative journalism   Use 2002 to conquer this obstacle course of progressively demanding techniques

'How I wrote the story': Trust your goose bumps   Bob shows you how to start your feature in the middle of the action

A vocabulary list for reporters and editors   A guide to keep you and your boss on the same page from `BBI' to 'power verbs' to `speed bumps'

'How I wrote the story': Daddy, where does style come from?   John Glionna answers the question with a tale of L.A.'s most dangerous bus line

'How I wrote the story': Who IS this guy?   Scott Kraft on the struggle to profile a suddenly notorious newsmaker

Who won the 'Who Won?' story?   Breaking down five versions of the news media's uncounted-ballot study

'How we wrote the story': You can do a lot in a day   Judy Pasternak and Stephen Braun bring extra dimensions to a tough murder story

'How I wrote the story': Lessons in planning   Jenifer Warren's methodical work habits help a tricky profile succeed

Why the best journalism of 2001 is 200 words long   The NYT's WTC mini-obits are lessons in saying more with less

A breakdown of a long story that 'tracks'   In which we demand: Does each cluster of paragraphs perform a unique and vital function?

A breakdown of a short story that 'tracks'   In which we demand: Does each paragraph perform a unique and vital function?

'How I wrote the story': Abandoning your comfort zone   Bill Plaschke gets hooked, crosses his fingers and chases a yarn far off his
beat


'Voice' Part II: Profiles in courage   A series of writers demonstrate a key component: the willingness to take a risk

'Voice' Part I: One writer's catalog of versatile styles    A quintet of Kim Murphy leads shows you the importance of calibrating

'How I wrote the story': Take your assignments with a grain of salt   Jill Leovy's editor had one view of the story. Jill's gut told her otherwise

'How I wrote the story': Making sense of a pissing match    Doug Smith keeps an open mind when a gadfly takes on a small town

'How I wrote the story': Organizing the long piece   Dancing the Barry Siegel Two-Step: (1) Deconstruct. (2) Reconstruct.

'How I wrote the story': Distinguishing your story from the other thousand   Intrigued by an AIDS support group, Deborah Schoch solves the 'oh-no, not-that-again' problem

`How I wrote the story': Creating a narrative spine   A dash of structural seasoning perks up an everyday environmental news-feature

`How I wrote the story': Parachuting into a strange town   Bill Plaschke's mission was to make sense of a civic paradox in two days

`How I wrote the story': Profiling the 'average' family   Lessons in penetrating a social cliche

Foreshadowing your key sub-themes   Or, for the socially minded: Keeping that blind date interested through dinner

Where good ideas come from   Four writers offer four techniques about how to conceptualize more creatively

Six questions to ask yourself before you type that anecdotal lead   How make sure the anecdote doesn't cause more problems than it solves

Curb your dependence on dependent clauses   A continuation of last week's jihad against inflated sentences

Those long sentences are sabotaging you   How to stop cramming and start cutting.

How to increase the maturity of your writing   More ideas, analysis and sweat. Less wordplay, quotes and artifice

The 17 worst cliches in the newspaper business   With so many examples of overuse that you will never, ever employ any of them again

'I want my writing to be more sophisticated'   Here are 14 techniques to make it happen more often

'Prewriting' from three perspectives   How to get more out of those moments between the last scrawl in your notebook and the first stroke at your keyboard

Forty ways to improve collaboration at your newspaper   Take this list and share it with the offending line editor, copy editor or reporter. Give peace a chance

Details, details and, while you're at it, some more details, please   How one masterful feature writer psyches himself for battle

Speed thrills: Improving your story's pace   Why those final cuts you make (or are too vain to make) make such a difference in hooking the reader

Your 'givens' ain't like mine   Slow down and ask yourself: Just what does the reader bring to my story?

The 15-minute workout   Serious about getting better? Pick one technique from our list and work on it--every stinking day

Lessons from covering the extraordinary   How reporters grappled with the first month of California's electricity crisis

Building stronger middle sections of your stories   Finding ways to take the reader deeper by the halfway point

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